January 9, 20206 yr So I just composed my first piece and I would be very grateful to receive feedback. Please don't mind the mistakes in the recording. (I literally recorded the piece right after I composed it so please cut me some slack) Also, I feel that I did something wrong in the sheet music. Please let me know I didn't do it right. Thank you. Edited January 9, 20206 yr by ModderKevin
January 9, 20206 yr Your score... I feel a lot in 3/4, with the downbeat on the low notes. Is this notation a conscious decision? Like the beginning of a new phrase in the middle of m. 66 is baffling to me.
January 9, 20206 yr Author Thank you so much for spotting that in measure 66! I'm really new to notation so I'm not very clear with this stuff. 😀
January 11, 20206 yr Nice. Dramatic, but like low-key dramatic. The notation is a little odd for me. It's not terrible but I think the time signature should reflect the rhythmic pulse of the music. This would look and feel more natural in 3/4, like Monarcheon said. Other than that, nice work!
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