February 1, 20206 yr I quite like the opening, but the rythmic diminution from second 45 sound a bit ackward to me...such as the triplet rythm later on. Think you can find a more natural development, it sounds a bit out of the place. Anyway the opening sounds well balanced and elegant. Can you please attach the score?
February 1, 20206 yr Nice. My main concern is the mainly parallel movement in some parts (m. 19-35). Edited February 1, 20206 yr by Luis Hernández
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