Infamous

I created an intro imagining the epidemic rising slowly and the end part depicting the world markets crashing and with gloom everywhere.

What do you guys think?

the "A to Bb" in the chorus clashes with the synth string patch.  

Also, I would listen to some other scores on how to build depth and width to your sound.  It's a cool start but far from finished

Is there a reason the strings start on C instead of a triadic chord tone? There's the potential for the pitch of that to move in homophonic harmony to the rest while keeping the upper notes constant.

I like it. It's hypnotic and has a sense of dread. My recommendation is to use dynamics to create suspense, and variation in the notes to make it more interesting.