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Edited March 21, 20242 yr by Yuchanbot

Hi, it sounds lovely.

Very cinematic, catchy motiv and use of nice different textures. I didn't look at the score on detail, but the harmony is definitely rich and well driven.

Consistent short piece and very pleasant 🙂 (I played it already 3 times)

Edited April 25, 20205 yr by Guillem82

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Edited March 21, 20242 yr by Yuchanbot

Very nice composition! I really like the orchestration and character! I only wished it was a bit longer, as it sounds like it could be a beautiful opening movement to a serenade or sinfonietta for string orchestra. Well done!

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Edited March 21, 20242 yr by Yuchanbot

I agree with Theodore Servin- the final section is very short and seems like it could be a fully developed section.  It's also a bit too well separated for my taste- perhaps a linking theme, a more subtle change in pulse or at least a pedal note between the two sections would make them less disjunct?  Your melody writing is very fluent though and as others have said the texture is well handled, well done.