May 4, 20205 yr Seaside Dreaming Master.mp3 Hi guys I'm new to this site and I would appreciate feedback on this piece I've composed. Thanks.
May 5, 20205 yr That's indeed a nice dreamy pieces, but it feel a bit strange that you finish in a different key you started with. You start in EM and you finisch in DM, right? Why?
May 5, 20205 yr Author Hi there, thanks for listening and commenting. I changed the key because there is an A7 chord at around 2:35 to resolve to DM and to make the DM section a bit different from the EM section
May 5, 20205 yr Beautiful and moving piece, Aled. Everything made perfect sense... until that jarring dim7 progression at 2:17 that took us down a whole step to D minor. I'm absolutely not opposed to shaking things up, even in a piece as smoothly legato as this one, but perhaps your transitional passage could turn us out in a higher key than what we started in? Just a suggestion. You definitely have a knack for composition and know how to turn out a good piece of music. Thanks for sharing.
May 5, 20205 yr Author Hi, thanks for the nice comments! And yes, that is a fair criticism listening back to it, so I'll keep it in mind and thanks for the suggestion.
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