May 27, 20205 yr Hallo! This is a work I spent a little while working on and is quite short for Violin, with Piano accompaniment. Audio is computer generated and broken around 1:30. As always, feedback and critique are greatly appreciated. Danke! (Thank you) p.s. I don't speak very much German so don't bother trying to communicate to me in it. Edited May 27, 20205 yr by PBStu
June 13, 20205 yr Die Stimme klingt ziemlich chaotisch. The violin feels too random to me. There's no real semblance of a theme to latch onto and not enough rests: It's kinda just go, go, go all the time.
July 2, 20205 yr Not bad advice from the above. I'd add that hammering the tonic at the beginning and end up each bar makes the whole thing feel too claustrophobic.
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