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Die Stimme der Geige - The Voice of the Violin

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Hallo!

 

This is a work I spent a little while working on and is quite short for Violin, with Piano accompaniment. Audio is computer generated and broken around 1:30. As always, feedback and critique are greatly appreciated.

Danke! (Thank you)

p.s. I don't speak very much German so don't bother trying to communicate to me in it.

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Die Stimme klingt ziemlich chaotisch. 

The violin feels too random to me. There's no real semblance of a theme to latch onto and not enough rests: It's kinda just go, go, go all the time.

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Not bad advice from the above. I'd add that hammering the tonic at the beginning and end up each bar makes the whole thing feel too claustrophobic. 

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