July 20, 20205 yr Crossed voices in m. 10. Extra harmony would be nice on notes immediately succeeding the chords (half + quarter), otherwise it sounds a bit too terraced.
November 8, 20205 yr Nice! I really like this piece, it has something unique about it. I like the variation both in melody and accompaniment. Maybe it's easier to read bass notes in staccato on the first part?
November 8, 20205 yr Author 55 minutes ago, Olov said: Nice! I really like this piece, it has something unique about it. I like the variation both in melody and accompaniment. Maybe it's easier to read bass notes in staccato on the first i Thank you for listening and commenting. I did end up rewriting it with the cross voice correction and an alternative bass that sounds less terraced but after printing it out I deleted it off my phone, I wish I uploaded it now. It didn't occur to me at the time to just use articulation to get that staccato rhythm, I agree it would be easier to read and less fussy. 🙂
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