September 22, 20205 yr Hi DeL Great introduction to your music, and welcome! And it sounds like you recorded yourself playing this? I like the improvisational style of it, kind of reminds me of a scene in a show or movie or something. One piece of advice I could give would be to vary the root position chords in the left hand a bit. Try some inversions for more interesting bass and harmony lines, or giving the left hand the melody. All in all, I hope you stick around, feel free to comment on other's works, I'm sure you'll get more feedback. Well done! Edited September 22, 20205 yr by Thatguy v2.0
September 22, 20205 yr Author Yes, i recorded myself improvising. Thanks for the advice, i'll try to improvise better next time 😁
September 22, 20205 yr 49 minutes ago, DeL said: i'll try to improvise better next time 😁 No one said it was "bad", mate. Just some suggestions on what I think could be improved on 👍
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