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Lento for Trio in E major


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Here is the first movement for a trio sonata in Emajor I am working on. Any feedback is welcomed!

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10 hours ago, Luis Hernández said:

This piece sounds nice with good counterpoint. But I thing the flute is not in its most brilliant register.

 

Thats a fair point! I got some separate feedback that said the same thing! I am going to have to start using more of the different registers for the flutes when I write!

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Hi, very nice indeed. I agree with Luis, the register feels more apropiaty for a Oboe or a second violin. 

The weakest part for me is the final cadence. It feels like something is missing there. If you add one measure before the end, it sounds more satisfiying to me. Basically you skip the tonic for a VI instead and then II6-V-I with a perfect authentic cadence.

It feels a much stronger arrival feeling in my opinion.

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I'm looking forward for the next movements of your sonata 😉

 

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3 hours ago, Guillem82 said:

Hi, very nice indeed. I agree with Luis, the register feels more apropiaty for a Oboe or a second violin. 

The weakest part for me is the final cadence. It feels like something is missing there. If you add one measure before the end, it sounds more satisfiying to me. Basically you skip the tonic for a VI instead and then II6-V-I with a perfect authentic cadence.

It feels a much stronger arrival feeling in my opinion.

image.png.40883fe202cc25397f4a5d923a326070.png

I'm looking forward for the next movements of your sonata 😉

 

 

Thanks for the feedback! I can hear what you mean, I will have to go back and edit it for a stronger final cadence!

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