August 1, 20214 yr Hi everyone! I wanted to share this piece that I wrote called "Enchanted Forest", isnpired by the music for fantasy games. I wanted to describeย aย dangerousย walkย throughย anย enchantedย forest.ย I chose toย representย thatย byย havingย theย melodyย and the harmonyย notย stayย inย oneย key,ย butย ratherย switchย betweenย differentย keysย andย modes,ย asย ifย theย melodyย "gotย lost"ย inย theย forest. ย Any feedback on everything (from composition to mixing and mastering) is appreciated! ย
August 4, 20214 yr Author @MJFOBOEThanks for the feedback! Really appreciate you taking the time to listen! ย
August 5, 20214 yr Sounds good and fits the haunted forest theme well. I would say that the modulation of the strings and brass could be smoother, though. The dynamics have some very sharp increases and with them, some harsher resonances that could also be EQ'd down. Edited August 5, 20214 yr by AngelCityOutlaw
August 15, 20214 yr I really love so much of what you've done! Great job Volodymyr. I agree with ^^AngelCityOutlaw that some of the dynamic changes take us out of the story you're telling.
August 25, 20214 yr Author @AngelCityOutlawSorry for a late reply, for some reason I didn't recieve mail notifications in case someone answers like I usually do. Just wanted to thank you for taking your time to listen and providing feedback!
August 25, 20214 yr Author @Joe SipznerSorry for a late reply, just wanted to thank you for listening and providing your thoughts!
September 7, 20214 yr You know it is interesting that it sounds like ancient version of Max Payne theme-ย https://musescore.com/user/29326211/scores/5476461
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