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Hi all,

Very late and new to this game of recording stuff, would be great to get some feedback on composing/song structures.

The above is an idea i tried to knock up in GarageBand, which is very rough and incomplete. I am just not sure whether it makes any musical sense :)

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Will you provide the score of it for easy referencing?

I think the music is really chill. It's a gradual building up from the drum, bass to electric guitars, and the showy electric guitar part is great, as listened by a layman of band music. 

Regarding composing/song structures, I don't think that needs to be emphasized at all. I love the improvisatory nature of the piece. It freely displays what the performer feel at the moment. Structure will for sure ruin the essence of this music, since it's not at all about planning but immediate action and reaction with the audience.

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On 11/24/2022 at 4:18 AM, Henry Ng said:

Will you provide the score of it for easy referencing?

I think the music is really chill. It's a gradual building up from the drum, bass to electric guitars, and the showy electric guitar part is great, as listened by a layman of band music. 

Regarding composing/song structures, I don't think that needs to be emphasized at all. I love the improvisatory nature of the piece. It freely displays what the performer feel at the moment. Structure will for sure ruin the essence of this music, since it's not at all about planning but immediate action and reaction with the audience.

 

Very much appreciate your insight, Henry. As an untrained musician, it is hard to know whether the musical piece passes as acceptable or not in the musical realm.

However, I see from your response that music is more an art than a science so anything is valid and there will always be a listener who appreciates and one that is not a fan.

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