One of these days

Uno de estos días... One of these days.

A simple piano piece, with its twists .... That's the one of my dogs (calle Happy) is.

Hi Luis,

6 hours ago, Luis Hernández said:

A simple piano piece, with its twists

it's simple but lovely isn't it? Very comfortable and soothing to listen like breeze. Your harmonic progression is natural and relaxing but not without good effect.  For the middle section I love your usage of the unexpected chords, like the minor neapolitan and G minor chord. I like in b.79 when the texture gets thicker with good counterpoint! The modulation to E major first and then getting back to A major is a good little trick as well!

I think the up an octave sign is not necessary here since the notes are not really high for me!

Thanks for sharing!

Henry

4 hours ago, Henry Ng Tsz Kiu said:

 

I think the up an octave sign is not necessary here since the notes are not really high for me!

Thanks for sharing!

Henry

 

I agree, i will change it. Thanks.

This all works very nicely, with the mood shifting gracefully using simple changes in the right hand patterns while the left creates continuity.  I'm not entirely fond of the ending.  Maybe a little more of a transition to get to it would help for my ear, but on the whole, to me to piece is very successful!  And your dog is very cute!!

This piano (soundfont?) you use lacks that certain brightness some have and that I usually don't like, so, good choice!

As always, the score and the music itself tells me you very well know your craft. The pace and harmony makes me remind works of Paul F. Page (a very prolific composer out there in freescore): mature, precise, simple and highly effective.

Such ending probably needs a real interpretation, it didn't convince me too much but I am not sure if either the score itself is guilty, or the limitations playback has is instead.

Kind regards,
Daniel–Ømicrón.