June 27, 20232 yr Hi guys, here's a wrote song I composed and recorded. Would enjoy hearing your thoughts. Thank you!
June 27, 20232 yr Hello @Aled Edwards, I know nothing about rock music. I love the Eb minor verse and the Bb mixolydian/dorian chrous. The sound effect is interesting for me. The mood is quite excited I would say. Your vocal is more tenor and thin and make the song ironic! Thx for sharing! Henry
June 27, 20232 yr Cool music Aled I like the alt-rock feel this has. Your voice reminds me of Les Claypool; I like the laugh part and the Beck-like rapping or talking sections. Cool drum parts and the guitar work is catchy. I love the guitar solo, nice wah moments before the gain really kicks in. The fast part at 3:25 was good, I would have maybe ended your solo with that, or extended the faster sections to the end, because it felt like it was about to build some energy but then just died. The tones are all great too. You had some nice moments with vibrato on held notes, I would have maybe added subtle vibrato to more of the notes though. I was once told to always add at least the slightest vibrato to any held note, and I'm a firm believer in that. That's just nitpicky though, I had to find something critical to say 😄 Nice work, and thanks for sharing this. I'm looking forward to more songs of this style by you!
June 28, 20232 yr Author Thanks! Yeah, I agree with you on the vibrato, I have a tendency to overdo it when I play live/normally, but I think I went a little bit too far in the opposite direction when recording this, ah well. Cheers for listening
June 29, 20232 yr I love this! Great job! Would you post the lyrics for the members at large to be able to follow along with the lyrics? I can't understand all the words in the recording. But other than that the recording is really great! Thanks for sharing!
June 29, 20232 yr Author Hi, thanks for listening! Here are the lyrics: Verse 1: Behind the wall, making a plan To earn a buck, destroy the land Take it to the street you gotta' show them what you mean, you wanna' let it out and maybe a cause a scene Little did you know that it wasn't gonna' do it, they've broken up the planet, now you want to glue it Pre-chorus: You don't know what you're doing Blinded by your greed Chorus: As I'm gazing at the sky, I can see it's full of fire My last day on earth, end of human kind As the ending starts to rise Verse 2: Walking the streets, smoke in my lungs Flickered out, everyone's done
July 21, 20232 yr woah this is incredible! Adding this to my playlist for sure. Your voice is incredible
July 31, 20232 yr Author On 7/21/2023 at 7:52 PM, NicholasG said: woah this is incredible! Adding this to my playlist for sure. Your voice is incredible Thanks!
February 19, 20242 yr @Aled Edwards Great song! Can I have a little more info about the time signature of the piece? I'm hearing a duple meter (2/2, 2/4) but can you clarify? I'm creating a short video around pulse and time signatures and this piece is a good candidate for the video.
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