March 17, 20242 yr Good job! This is pretty good for your first Minuet. The only two things i'd say is 1. the main motif with the trill is a tad bit over used in my opinion. creating separate variations or perhaps creating another rhythm instead of the same 8th to 2 16th notes and 2. is that i feel again the rhythm of the left hand is always the same: half and quarter. Maybe add something like some 8ths? Look at Minuet in G and look at the left hand. It's still relatively simple but always making something new causing the listener to wonder whats coming next. Have a good day! I actually saw this on reddit earlier today haha.
March 22, 20242 yr Hey there, nice music! Your music flows really well, and I think that's thanks to your clear and concise phrasing. This was a great exploration with two voices. Moving forward, continue to keep a keen eye on the intervals your voices create. Many times, it was an octave, 4th, or 5th. It's a cool sound, but my ears wanted to hear a nice 3rd or 6th after a while. Well done 🙂
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