bhelloworld420 Posted November 29 Posted November 29 (edited) Hi, I wanted some feedback on a basic Fugue I composed. I attached the pdf and Midi file Edited November 29 by bhelloworld420 MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Fugue in D minor (1) > next PDF Fugue in D minor Quote
Fermata Posted November 29 Posted November 29 It's a huge improvement compared to the previous piece! Can you update the PDF so it matches the audio? Quote
bhelloworld420 Posted November 29 Author Posted November 29 (edited) 28 minutes ago, Fermata said: It's a huge improvement compared to the previous piece! Can you update the PDF so it matches the audio? oops my bad, the audio is actually wrong, that was an old version. Also thanks for always looking at my work I really appreciate it Edited November 29 by bhelloworld420 Quote
Henry Ng Tsz Kiu Posted November 29 Posted November 29 Hi @bhelloworld420, You directly take the first subject of Bach's C# minor fugue in WTCI which is also my favourite! In b.9 I won't have the soprano in rest! There's a parallel btw. b.21 to 22. I like the stretto in b.24, nice attempt! I think you could include more movements in the piece as well to make the counterpoint more fluent. Thx for sharing! Henry Quote
Fermata Posted November 29 Posted November 29 I've marked the errors with red (see the score below). It shouldn't take much time to revise them 🙂 Those recommendations that Henry suggested above should also be incorporated to get the most out of this piece. PDF d_2 Quote
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