Maxthemusicenthusiast Posted Sunday at 02:33 PM Posted Sunday at 02:33 PM https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1TZJ7a6jue0wpKBrUJ4AWOg8HYsBcfwSd?usp=sharing This is my submission for the 2025 Halloween Composition Competition, Woodwind Quintet No. 1. When I composed the fast section of the piece, it had a bossa nova feel. I liked this feel enough to want to develop it further. I decided to slow it down in sketch form, and the result was something that sounded like a happy-go-lucky, yet sinister, ice cream truck. 2 Quote
TristanTheTristan Posted Sunday at 05:24 PM Posted Sunday at 05:24 PM Nice Quintet! I find a lot of dissonance used, nice! Sadly, it is slightly boring to me. Otherwise, it is good! Quote
TristanTheTristan Posted Sunday at 05:45 PM Posted Sunday at 05:45 PM Melodies Themes Motives Harmony Chords Textures Form Development Structure Time Originality Creativity Score Presentation Instrumentation Orchestration Playability Execution of Given Challenge Taste 8 8 7 10 9 9.5 5 6.5 Quote
TristanTheTristan Posted Sunday at 05:45 PM Posted Sunday at 05:45 PM Just now, TristanTheTristan said: Melodies Themes Motives Harmony Chords Textures Form Development Structure Time Originality Creativity Score Presentation Instrumentation Orchestration Playability Execution of Given Challenge Taste 8 8 7 10 9 9.5 5 6.5 Very original piece of music. Quote
Thatguy v2.0 Posted 6 hours ago Posted 6 hours ago Hey Max This is great, I love woodwinds. On 10/12/2025 at 9:33 AM, Maxthemusicenthusiast said: When I composed the fast section of the piece, it had a bossa nova feel. I liked this feel enough to want to develop it further. I decided to slow it down in sketch form, and the result was something that sounded like a happy-go-lucky, yet sinister, ice cream truck. This was my favorite part! I know midi doesn't do ANY music justice, but I think it's especially true with your piece. The eerie nature and sparse texture you were going for was really cool, and the winds can really bring it to life. But the midi makes it kind of drag, whereas I think a live performance would really highlight the silence between the notes and well as the shrill colors the instruments are capable of. Speaking of the bossa nova feel you were going for, I really hoped you developed that more. The slow part before it felt like a prelude, building to something faster. When it came, it was over so quickly, then back to the slower section. The ABA works, but I think it should be an "aBa" instead of an "AbA". Maybe there was a time issue, or maybe it's just hard to know how much of a chunk your piece is of a slow or fast section. It's fine as is, these would all be thoughts on future music, but that's the impression I got. Wonderful stuff here, you should share more when you write it! Don't be afraid to poke around the forum too, lots of great people around here; they'd love to hear thoughts from you. Be sure to vote too! Quote
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