Soliloquy for Organ No. 8

This is my Soliloquy for Organ No. 8.  Like my Soliloquies for Organ No.s 2-7 and my two sets of sententiae for organ, it is composed for organ manuals only. 

Here is the link to my "Soliloquy for Organ No. 7":

https://www.youngcomposers.com/t47956/soliloquy-for-organ-no-7/

your piece is in F minor, you should use flats

3 hours ago, Thatguy v2.0 said:

your piece is in F minor, you should use flats

 

Thanks for pointing it out. I changed it in the score and uploaded the revised score.

Hi Luder.

I liked this one more than the seventh but I feel some imbalance that does not convince me. The piece doesn't seem to end right to me despite of its little development (and thus little need to work much on the ending). Plus, I would say it's the 5-bar phrase and its inner structure somewhat sets me off, not because there's anything wrong per se in 5-bar phrases but as I say because of the (2+2+1)+(2+2+1) inner structure that doesn't work for me in this case.

Can you link the other Soliloquies for organ here? Thank you in advance.

Kind regards,
Daniel–Ø.

1 hour ago, Omicronrg9 said:

Hi Luder.

I liked this one more than the seventh but I feel some imbalance that does not convince me. The piece doesn't seem to end right to me despite of its little development (and thus little need to work much on the ending). Plus, I would say it's the 5-bar phrase and its inner structure somewhat sets me off, not because there's anything wrong per se in 5-bar phrases but as I say because of the (2+2+1)+(2+2+1) inner structure that doesn't work for me in this case.

Can you link the other Soliloquies for organ here? Thank you in advance.

Kind regards,
Daniel–Ø.

 

Thanks for your review Daniel. Regarding the previous soliloquies for organ, I had posted them all but they were from before 2016 (actually 2013 and earlier) and so they belong to the list of posted compositions that got deleted once the new version of the website was introduced sometime in late April - early May 2016. To be sure I had reposted some of my 181 posted pieces with the tag "Old Pieces". So I might repost some of my soliloquies for organ No. 1- 6, hopefully soon.

Great! Also thanks for providing score, it's a practice that despite not feasible in some kinds of music, it is always appreciated because it allows (at least from my POV) to better get the pieces. 

Regards!

4 hours ago, luderart said:

Thanks for pointing it out. I changed it in the score and uploaded the revised score.

Awesome, looks much better now 🙂