New W.I.P. Symph. Orchestral Score

Thoughts on my current rough-drafted ideas / progress on a new symphony orchestral score I'm working on? This is a very rough draft. lol. The form isn't quite proper right this minute. Better transitions and more complex sections will be added in time.

Thanks in advance 😉New(2).pdf

Hey Kyle @UncleRed99!

It clearly is captivating and promising "rough" draft! I like the majestic tone overall.

I think after the climax in b.31, before going to a quieter section in b.34 you can have a transition instead of just a chord, but it's just a draft now so it's fine haha! I hope the contrasting section in b.34 longer and stay away from the F minor for a bit longer too. Also in the last adagio in b.51 I would add more movement and countermelodies to vary and contrast it with the Adagio beginning, like adding tremolos and some quaver movements between the chords like in b.53 and 58.

Thx for sharing!

Henry

41 minutes ago, Henry Ng Tsz Kiu said:

Hey Kyle @UncleRed99!

It clearly is captivating and promising "rough" draft! I like the majestic tone overall.

I think after the climax in b.31, before going to a quieter section in b.34 you can have a transition instead of just a chord, but it's just a draft now so it's fine haha! I hope the contrasting section in b.34 longer and stay away from the F minor for a bit longer too. Also in the last adagio in b.51 I would add more movement and countermelodies to vary and contrast it with the Adagio beginning, like adding tremolos and some quaver movements between the chords like in b.53 and 58.

Thx for sharing!

Henry

 

Yes, ideas that I've brewed as well. I'm glad that the ideas are not lonely, here. lol I also just wanted to share this because c'mon... Why wouldn't I show these chords off for others to enjoy as well 😭 They're gorgeous, I think 

20 minutes ago, UncleRed99 said:

Why wouldn't I show these chords off for others to enjoy as well 😭 They're gorgeous, I think 

haha yeah indeed they are.