A piece I've composed based on a given melody (first allegro mezzo forte part)

i have not taken any composition classes before

and also the title of the piece is just a placeholder, the reason why it's called Fiesta is that that it's the name of the song the melody originated from

(also if u cant tell, the audio is just extracted from musescore)

any feedback would be appreciated! thanks for checking it out!

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Edited 6 hours ago6 hr by PikapikaHei

It’s an interesting piece. I think you make excellent use of the dynamics and the rhythmic foundation, creating an intriguing yet effective contrast with the slow section.

What I like most is that the piano really sounds like a piano; I mean, the writing is idiomatic for the instrument.