One more try

Hello

A few years ago, whilst on a course I took on ‘Contemporary Composition Techniques’, I wrote a short piece for piano which I later revised and titled ‘One more try’.

Recently, I had the idea of orchestrating it.

It is written in a free, non-functional, chromatic style.

The score isn’t condensed because the instruments that come in pairs often have very different or distant lines. It’s in concert pitch.

Below is a video of the piano version.

One more try orch.pdf

Honestly, on a personal opinion, I don't find this style rather enjoyable to listen to, however, I will say, it reminds me of the old Tom & Jerry, Looney Toons / WB Cartoon play along tracks that would interact with the characters on screen as the show played 😅

Anyway... There are moments where my ear is enjoying the music, while there are many other moments where I wonder what the point of the development is, what purpose the dissonance serves, and what story is being told by the composition... I find myself lost while listening to this, and unfortunately, not in the best way, I'm afraid. However, moments of harmony that are done very well, for example, would be the opening chord, just to name one. Those sort of textures, when put in the right places, are very lovely :)

- Unc

@UncleRed99

OK, thanks – that’s an understandable reaction.