Saturday at 07:11 PM2 days This is my piano miniature.In this music, I wanted to capture the image of a doll or a figurine: a cold, lifeless kind of beauty... But is it really lifeless? =)
Sunday at 05:39 PM1 day A curious and lovely piece.You’ve made good use of the piano’s range. At first, the very high register can be a bit tiring, but this is soon offset.It would probably sound good on a celesta, an instrument we associate with this sort of scene.
Sunday at 05:56 PM1 day Author 16 minutes ago, Luis Hernández said:A curious and lovely piece.You’ve made good use of the piano’s range. At first, the very high register can be a bit tiring, but this is soon offset.It would probably sound good on a celesta, an instrument we associate with this sort of scene.Thank you very much for your positive feedback.Yes, you’re right—a celesta would have worked well at the beginning. In fact, I was, to some extent, imitating one by using the piano in its highest register.
6 hours ago6 hr Author 6 minutes ago, MJFOBOE said:A "witty" "charming" work with a nice friendly "glow"!MarkThanks, Mark! I’m glad the piece came across as friendly and charming. Thank you for listening. =)
32 minutes ago32 min Hello,Since you are looking for feedback on the images your piece evokes I will share some thoughts.measure 1 - it feels very playful for me. measure 17 - I get this very specific feeling of a sense of wonder and hardshipmeasure 25 - this part feels especially dance likemeasure 36 - it gets a bit goofy heremeasure 52 - it ends on a playful note for me. The piece is very nice, it doesn't feel too lifeless to me.
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