Saturday at 07:11 PM2 days This is my piano miniature.In this music, I wanted to capture the image of a doll or a figurine: a cold, lifeless kind of beauty... But is it really lifeless? =)
Sunday at 05:39 PM1 day A curious and lovely piece.You’ve made good use of the piano’s range. At first, the very high register can be a bit tiring, but this is soon offset.It would probably sound good on a celesta, an instrument we associate with this sort of scene.
Sunday at 05:56 PM1 day Author 16 minutes ago, Luis Hernández said:A curious and lovely piece.You’ve made good use of the piano’s range. At first, the very high register can be a bit tiring, but this is soon offset.It would probably sound good on a celesta, an instrument we associate with this sort of scene.Thank you very much for your positive feedback.Yes, you’re right—a celesta would have worked well at the beginning. In fact, I was, to some extent, imitating one by using the piano in its highest register.
19 hours ago19 hr Author 6 minutes ago, MJFOBOE said:A "witty" "charming" work with a nice friendly "glow"!MarkThanks, Mark! I’m glad the piece came across as friendly and charming. Thank you for listening. =)
13 hours ago13 hr Hello,Since you are looking for feedback on the images your piece evokes I will share some thoughts.measure 1 - it feels very playful for me. measure 17 - I get this very specific feeling of a sense of wonder and hardshipmeasure 25 - this part feels especially dance likemeasure 36 - it gets a bit goofy heremeasure 52 - it ends on a playful note for me. The piece is very nice, it doesn't feel too lifeless to me.
1 hour ago1 hr Author 12 hours ago, Grant Weep said:Hello,Since you are looking for feedback on the images your piece evokes I will share some thoughts.measure 1 - it feels very playful for me.measure 17 - I get this very specific feeling of a sense of wonder and hardshipmeasure 25 - this part feels especially dance likemeasure 36 - it gets a bit goofy heremeasure 52 - it ends on a playful note for me.The piece is very nice, it doesn't feel too lifeless to me.Thank you very much for your positive feedback.
34 minutes ago34 min Hello, @Alexx! This miniature sounds lovely and I enjoyed it. Well composed, and I feel some nice musical stories in this piece. To me, it captures a doll, but not a lifeless one — rather, a doll that is playing at night — the outside of the house is winter. I think why it evokes such stories is because this piece has a lot of popping movements: it gives me the feeling of "moving". However, I certainly feel a kind of cold vibe.Thanks for sharing!Best,Lithl.
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