Singing My Pain Away

Hello,

its cool with a new songforum! :D

This is a simple song I made lately to get over hard periodes in my life:

Singing my pain away

Here is the lyrics:

::Singing my pain away::

I am here

Singing my song

Singing my song for you to hear the pain

This is how I can make me strong

I am here

Singing away

Singing away my pain to be okay

This is how I can make the day

I am all right

I am fine on my way today

I am all right

I am all right

I’m still here

Singing around

Singing my way to you

Its getting better

Its going fine

I’m gonna say this on

So don’t you worry

Don’t you worry

Don’t

Don’t you worry

I am here

Singing away

Singing away my pain to be okay

This is how I can make the day

I’m just fine

I hope you like it, and if you dont; its ok :)

daniel

Lol, I found it entertaining. I'm on my third listen! :musicwhistle:

Tkanks :D

Im sorry i don't like much about it.

Here is the things that will make it better.

Well...i believe that the lyrics you've written took barely any time to write, please do correct me if i am wrong. So suppose you take more time writing

the lyrics.

The vocals are too loud for the music in the back, you can barely hear the music in the back. So suppose you make the vocals quieter.

Im unaware if these are your vocals or not, but i am sorry to say that your vocals are not good. Your vocals hit some good notes and made some good melody, but only in certain parts. Suppose getting a vocal teacher or someone to help you out with your singing? There is always room for improvement.

Please do not take my post to be harmful, this post was meant to help and was completly my opnions, you may either take them or leave them, it is your

choice.

Have a nice day. ;)

Hello Rachael,

at first; I am not dreaming of living and be rich of singing, I just made this song to express my feelings and get over a hard periode in my life. I dont care how my voice is.. ok, I care a little but not too much, hehe. It is better if the listeners just listen to/read the lyrics and imagin how it would be if the singer (who is me) and the instruments was more correct, and in my opinion it is better with

Hey Daniel,

can you post the song again? :)

Because the link is not working... :(