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A study for flute and harp. Writing a set of 12 such studies. Constructive feedback is very appreciated 🙂

Listening to this and looking at the score I have a few thoughts: 1. The introduction sounds like it has an ending. That's usually not desired. 2. Something just sounds weird there, I can't put my finger of it... I didn't look at the harmony thoroughly, maybe it's that, but maybe it's just about the MIDI. 3. Are you forming out structure before you have all the motives? I wouldn't do that. I'd recommend writing down all themes and ideas ahead - it'll make it easier to just flow with the music from theme to theme instead of "okay so I've done the first theme, Perfect Authentic Cadence and then we're moving on to the second theme" many people do, that causes sectional pieces with weak flows.