Hello @Bjarke! Since you mentioned a few “points of doubt” or areas that could be improved, I have to say that I really liked the piece in its current stage of a „sketch“ and the questions you pointed out are to be taken into consideration, although I would not see them critical. At first glance at the score, I had the impression that the piece might be too repetitive, but upon listening, I feel that the repetitions—with the use of slightly variations—are used effectively and do not make the piece boring overall. I like the rhythm and the continuously forward-driving tension. I could imagine that a performance by a real pianist would mitigate the remaining impression of monotony and mechanicalness, since a human performer would naturally bring more variety in articulation, dynamics, and tempo, as is the case in the current recording! As for the score, from a pianist’s perspective, I would feel uncomfortable with a number of passages where too many ledger lines are used, making them difficult to read or even unreadable. And I believe I have spotted a few places where the chords of the left and right hands overlap, i.e., play the same notes (for example, in measures 49, 50, 85–88). Correcting this would actually simplify the score.