Hello @Musicman_3254 ! The piece has (at the beginning) a very calming character and is somewhat reminiscent of a fairy tale movie (especially one you’d watch in winter during the Christmas season) or—once the vocals come in— of @PeterthePapercomPoser’s Christmas mashup from last year. 😂 Just when one is (almost) fallen asleep (around 03:11, measure 102), you’re instantly jolted awake by the staccatos of the harp and cello, as well as the blood-curdling trill of the flute, which sounds like a piercing birdcall—perhaps that of a cockatiel. Melodies Themes Motives and Harmony Chords Textures: The piece is based on a memorable melody, reminiscent of a lullaby, which recurs repeatedly in the treble instruments (i.e., flute and oboe d’amore) as well as in the baritone voice. This contrasts with accompanying textures, chords, and arpeggios, which are played largely by the harp. While the song maintains a diatonic harmony throughout all three verses, the coda appears to be somewhat different, with a pentatonic impression. Form Development Structure Time: The form of the piece could be that of a song with three verses and a coda. As mentioned above, the verses unfold in a pleasant and calming manner, with the accompaniment employing various textures without losing that character, only to be turned into the exact opposite in the coda. Originality Creativity: The originality of the piece arises on the one hand from the contrast of the calming song and the surprising end, as well as from the instrumentation, combining two melody instruments, a human voice and two more or less accompanying and percussive instruments together. Score Presentation: The notation for the vocal part—that is, the baritone staff—is somewhat inconsistent regarding the use of slurs and beams: In vocal score notation it is important to distinguish whether a single syllable is represented by a single note or whether multiple notes are sung for a single syllable (i.e., a melisma). There are two possibilities: In older, classical scores eighths and sixteenth notes are notated with flags (not beamed) for a single syllable, but if there are multiple notes to be sung for a single syllable, those notes are beamed together. No slurs at all (except for quarter or longer notes). In contemporary music, beams are used to show the rhythmic pattern, regardless of the text. However, in that case slurs indicate whenever multiple notes should be sung for a single syllable (and nowhere else). For example, there should be no slurs in measures 18–19, since each note has its own syllable, whereas the slur in measures 62–64a is correct, since all the notes are sung on a single syllable. As for clefs, I believe that a vocal score for baritone uses the standard bass clef, and the cello in its middle/high register uses the tenor clef (and neither uses the alto clef). One more minor point: You forgot to remove rests from some measures on the high staff of the harp (for example, in measures 32–42). Instrumentation Orchestration Playability: The choice of the instruments is effectively used to achieve the mood and effect of the piece. However, there are a number of concerns on the playability – as already mentioned by other reviewers, especially in the harp part. Execution of Given Challenge: You have set the poem to music and, therefore, created a relation to the given challenge. However, my personal—and therefore subjective—impressions evoke associations with winter rather than summer, though I could be completely wrong—perhaps I’m being influenced by today’s cold weather at the start of fall. Taste: I like this piece because of the humorous contrast between calm and scare. Melodies Themes Motives Harmony Chords Textures Form Development Structure Time Originality Creativity Score Presentation Instrumentation Orchestration Playability Execution of Given Challenge Taste 9 9 7 8.5 6 5.5 7.5 7.5 Average Score: 7.5