Hello MK
I would like to be Brutally Honest , and Hyper-Critical in my Review.
Starting with :
1: The Cons
2: The Pros
"A Call for Scores competition in Colorado"
1: The Cons-
I suspect that the Judges will have heard 100's of composition entry's over the years,
to the point where they've slightly Switched off, with thoughts of: "We heard it all before", Nothing Original.
Your "Intro" to the start of your composition, seems like a waste of time, what are we waiting for, and why are we waiting ?
2: The Pros-
Start the Composition @ 3:40 | THIS is where the ACTION starts,and will Wake up the Audience, as well as the judges.
Not only will they not be expecting this, but it will also evoke Originality,making you stand out,by elevating your composition to a Whole new level,
compared to Who they had to listen to Before,and after your presentation.
Your arrangement of the instruments and the quality of the performance,is of a very high Caliber, and shows Experience and wisdom in top quality Composing.
I wish you Luck.