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Hello everyone! Today, I am sharing my newest and extensive work for the string orchestra. Set in three movements within the key of G-minor, this work was completed after two years since it's initial creation and has a runtime of 14 minutes. The original first movement was made back in April of 2024, while the rest of the sonata was both created and completed in the summer of 2026. The two years in between these milestones saw an exponential growth in my skill and after a summer of listening to a large sum of chamber music, I felt inspired to finish the set and diversify my collection of works. If you would like to know more about the score, please go to page 2 (or page 4 of the PDF) to view specific information at each movement. Thanks for listening and viewing the score! __________________________ If you have any comments, whether constructive, critical or positive, drop your thoughts on this thread! I will reply when able. G-minString_Sonata_AUDIO.mp3 G-minString_Sonata_SCORE.pdf

Definitely Different than your usual Compositions,the Instrument sounds are of far superior quality ,than Musescore Of course this must be YOU.............However the overall "NEW" orchestration sounds like someone else ?

Hey! Thanks for the comments. To be honest, I struggled on a name in the first place lol. When I started this in 2024, my goal was to make a sonata and my original second movement was a Courante. So, the idea just stuck with me until now. I thought giving a dedicated name like some of my other works, however, it was a roadblock there. With the melodic voicing, it just comes to MuseScore at that point. I did some hidden notation to voice stuff louder or softer for the playback however. I may go back and update it for the dynamic reasoning, however, my thought process veers towards performance. The conductor of this work would hopefully know when to bring out the melody, or the ensemble would know how to balance regardless of dynamic.

Hey @MK_Piano ! This is a nice piece for chamber orchestra! I listened on headphones. I personally would have called it a Suite for Strings with the first movement being perhaps a Serenade, the middle movement a Bagatelle and the last movement a Scherzo or something. But those are just my personal suggestions and by no means do I intend to impose my interpretation upon your vision. One thing I did notice is that you don't seem to balance the melody above the rest of the voices (or perhaps you do in the mixer? But that wouldn't make sense since you don't always have the melody in the same voice.) I see all the string parts at the same dynamic at the same time. I think it would bring more clarity and balance to the music if you brought the melody out more by setting it at one dynamic level higher then the rest of the voices. One way that you do use to bring the melody out is by sometimes doubling it with multiple instruments together so good job there! I enjoy the sections where the melody is in the bass - I think that's a cool creative decision that brings variety to the music! Overall I really enjoyed it! Great job and thanks for sharing!

Hey Interlect! Weirdly enough, it’s still MuseScore sounds, albeit a different preset within the sample catalogue. Regardless of the sound font, it’s still my writing!

Okay!! Nicely done I will do my best to address your points for feedback as best as I can, but I am not the most experienced composer on the site, so I would keep your eyes out for better feedback later. 1. You have a few spots (really a whole section), starting at m.89 until m.96 where your beat 3 is completely unseen. It's a general rule of thumb to keep your 3rd beat clear, for reading purposes. 2. I enjoy the way your build up the piece, but I'm wondering if it would've been more effective had you established the melody a little sooner. Like even right after you state the iconic canon baseline - the melody starting in m.5 rather than the dotted qtr figure would help establish some familiarity (but disregard if this doesn't align with your vision for the piece). In my opinion, I just think it goes on for a little too long without the melody, especially since you mentioned this will be used in a game, I think having the iconic melody present from an earlier point would be nice. 3.This is just another one of those "in my opinion" things. But I would like if the rhythmic escalations were smoother. Like in m.6, if those 32nds were 8th notes or 8th and 16th notes (which would be 3 notes, but you get the gist). Up until that point you've just had qtr notes and 8th notes. Same thing in m.32, I would just prefer a rhythm that is different from what we've seen so far, but not jumping from qtr notes and 8ths and 16ths to 32nd notes. It's just a little jarring. This is part of what makes your inversion section successful to me. The rhythms are lining up and diverging in a way that seems smooth if that makes sense. By that point we've heard all of the rhythms you will use til the end of the piece and the 16th against the 8th makes sense and doesn't feel jarring. (This may speak to your 6th point above) I would say yes, however some of the times where I get a little lost are probably midi playback things and not issues with what's written. This is getting long-winded lol, so I'll end there. But thank you for sharing your work!! Hope my feedback was helpful.