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I agree! I love how Debussy moved his chord progressions along. Thanks for listening I love this too. The sneaky parallel fifths in that string of chords sounds "shiny" to me, my brain kept wanting me to tinker with the counterpoint but I ultimately went with my ears. Thanks for listening, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

This is quite an accomplishment, and intensely beautiful. I'm not qualified to say much more than that because of my rooting in Classicism, but you have my compliments. I hope the dedicatee appreciates it.

harmonies in bar 3 (loove the surprise Csharp) and 34 (yay raised sixth!!!) are my faves 🙂 whole thing has a wonderful melancholy vibe. the tresillo rhythm of the middle section is a fun vibe to bring into it

Very nice! It sounds to me a bit proto-impressionistic, like a young Debussy.

Idk, I still think the flow is off. Maybe its just a stylistic preference, but the cadences into rests, then starting back up again threw me off. I kept thinking the music ended, but then it kept going. It's nice as it is though, its a really great picture type of piece, like a tone poem. I just think it could have been shorter if you like it the way it is, to me its begging for contrast. Not necessarily something crazy, like throwing green paint on a black and white drawing. But for instance, your harmonic texture is nearly the same throughout. You change chords at the same rate, which makes it monotonous after a while. That can be fine, but we never went somewhere else, so it staled a bit to me. It was very pretty, and as always your coloring is fantastic. The sax is always a nice touch, and Im a fan of your style! Thanks for sharing bruh

Was still thinking of it, and will get to it, but yeah; life is getting ahead of me!🤪

Hi, I didn't intend for the piece to be in any particular key. Regarding the repetitions and the irritability you felt, I'm happy to hear it, since that's what I was aiming for with the piece: for the listener to feel that discomfort, which I associate with psychotic clowns burning the listener's brain.

Sounds like a clichetic soap opera or cheap romance 🤪