Thank you both for the feedback. Yes Monarcheon, the piece is an octave high and 2/2 may be a better idea. I'll have to ponder your other advice when I revisit this piece. I know that there were a few chords which would otherwise be normally discordant, save the progression.
Very nice. The title is aptly named after the sentiments the music carries. Feels like a sacred memory.
EDIT: the last notes feel like the pitter patter of raindrops off flower petals, evoking scenery and the feeling of a story.