thewritingwriter2010

Jeeze, you mad, bro=P

This started as a piece dedicated to my now ex girlfriend. (Weird how things work out) I'm a freshman at Georgia Southern University, and my comp final was to compose a three minute piece for any platform. So this it what I have. Like I said, it was started because of a girlfriend. And when she broke up with me I was only to the first phrase. The rest is more tense and dissonant, so I basically embodied as much anger as I could without becoming atonal. People have told me it sounds like a movie soundtrack? Let me know. One Last Breath

Wow. This is genius. I thoroughly enjoyed it. I mean, wow. I nearly got a cill when the jazz feeling section came in after the 15/4 bar. And you had my attention from then on. I'm curious as to what program you used. Or is this a live performance, your sounds are incredible.

Hey guys, it's been awhile. Last year, I devoted a piece to Christmas time....with a twist.However, that piece was not so great. So this year I wrote another piece entitled " A Merry Christmas Indeed." I also felt that now is a fitting time to post this work since Halloween is right around the corner.The .pdf and .mp3 file should be posted. I would love if you guys/girls looked at the score and give me things to improve on, and things of that nature. I hope to redeem myself from last years piece with this work. I hope you enjoy "A Merry Christmas Indeed."A Merry Christmas Indeed A Merry Christmas Indeed

My old high school band director ask me to arrange "Baby" by Justin Bieber into a stands tune. I personally am not fond of Justin Bieber at all but agreed to do this out of respect for my music teacher. She's done so much for me, the least I can do is arrange something for her. Baby

Thank you, I would be very grateful if you did.

Dude, the only reason I responded in such a way is because you were being an donkey. It seemed like you were talking down to me, like you assumed I knew nothing.Maybe you were trying to help, but it seemed like you were trying more to insult me then help me. This isn't my first time writing something. Oh, and I would critique your works, but you have none.

Don't "shame shame" me. I'm not stupid. In finale 09 there is no suspended cymbal, otherwise I would have chosen that. I also know the rules of writing percussion; however, I did what I could with the program to get the sound I wanted. If the composer does not specify otherwise on what to hit an instrument with then it is common knowledge that the player would use the "default" beater.

I agree with ParanoidFreak one hundred percent. It definitely has potential and I cannot wait to hear the finished product. Good writing! 10/10

Thank you very much. And yes, I meant soundfonts.

Hello there, I have recently been asked to write a techno intro for a local metal band. I agreed, but cannot seem to find any techno fonts. If anyone could give me an idea of where to get these fonts, or a program that uses them, I would be grateful. Thanks -Patrick W. Smith

Yes actually. I might be having it played by a high school in the next couple of months. Again, thank you sir.

Wow! I love this piece, its incredible. I have no words. Get it performed!

My first official composition.Please, be as critical as possible, as strings are not my primary group. Darkness

I love the way you changed styles completely. Honestly, this could be the most diverse thing you have written. I love the somewhat medieval/arabic sound you have towards the middle. A very nice piece Ben.

This is very nice. Although you're melody is repetitive, you present in a light so that it never becomes boring. I love the writing through the piece, very nice job.

I agree with the people who posted before, but I will have to say that I expected more. It's cute, but it's soooo short. It doesn't go anywhere.

Wow, I really don't have much to say. This is incredible by my standards, the mallet parts are incredible. I'm a percussionist myself, and I can't seem to write for mallets at all, but wow, I enjoyed this so much. The piece always keeps the audience guessing what is going to happen next. The more silent parts are even fierce. The whole piece is just great. It does not get old, which I struggle with sometimes. I've only had one piece premiered, and it was nothing compared to this. So bravi, sir. I commend you. Also, in one of my pieces the percussion is lacking. Could you listen and maybe give me some ideas for mallet parts and a broader percussion sound. Thanks. -Patrick

I rather enjoyed this. The beginning felt a bit metal though,which I love=] All in all, I agree with ben. But kudos man, this is great. What program did you use?

Thank you sir. 1) In finale, I have noticed that there is not a suspended cymbal, so the cymbal you see should be suspended. I have seen multiple pieces where the suspended cymbal is used 3 or 4 times. That being said, after going a back, a woodblock or tambourine part would fit great! Maybe I'll even add in a vibe part for the first lyrical section. I myself am a percussionist, but I cannot seem to write for it? 2)I have taken the tuba up an octave, along with the other instruments that go that low. I did not notice this before. I believe it was more a copy error. I play tube a bit myself, but never reached the lowest note. Thank you. 3) My best friend plays baritone, and while "It (the run) would be difficult, it could be done." I questioned that myself, but he was sure it can be done. 4) I apologize to all french horn players if that range is too high. Another friend of mine is going to Governor's Honors this summer in french horn, and according to him, that is a comfortable range. Thank you so much for reviewing my piece. I will take all of these things into consideration.

A piece written for a very,very special person to me. This is to honor her, and show you, the audience what I feel. The first bit of the piece is the initial falling in love, but when I realize that Katherine lives states away, I became upset. Thus, the piece becomes minor. Then, the piece portrays the anticipation of never knowing what will happen next, and having a sense of hope through the darkest times. Eventually, towards the end of the piece, I am re-united with Katherine, and I am at last happy again. I feel resolved when I am with her, hence the name. Also, at the end of the audio file, its skips and gets faster, I can assure you, that is not suppose to happen. Resolution

Hello world of young composers. It's Patrick; back with a new unfinished piece. Please give it a listen and tell me what you think/ what I should do differently/ where to go next. -Patrick W. Smith I think I literally spilled my soul on paper.mp3 I think I literally spilled my soul on paper.pdf

IMPORTANT ANOUNCEMENT: I've sent an invitation to everyone to join the group to save Highland High School's Band Program. While many of you either aren't a part of the band or don't go to Highland, I still ask that you support this cause. Its not only an issue of saving the band, its a matter of protecting the Fine Arts Departments in our schools. We must preserve these courses for our youth! Please go here and join the cause: http://www.facebook.com/pages/Save-the-Band-Program-at-Highland-High-School/315148142728?ref=nf

I started this song after listening to a lot of Mark Camphouse. It is a different style for me, and I think it allows me to better express myself. I would like to know what you, the listener, thinks should go next in addition to what you think about what I have written so far. My apologies if the score posted is in concert pitch. Thank you. -Patrick W. Smith The Story.pdf The Story.mp3

Patricks Spring Piece.pdfThis is a song I am writing for my schools spring concert, I am not sure where to go on the piece and I was wondering if you could give me some ideas. Help Patricks Spring Piece 1.mp3