One winter morning Piano solo

This is my fisrt composition and its very simple as im only grade 1 piano so tell me what you think and how i could improve it ??

One Winter Morning.MID

Good first attempt I'd say, especially if you are only grade 1 piano. I didn't really learn enough theory to be able to write something until at least grade 5 piano, and even then it was pretty simple stuff.

If you really want to improve this song then I would try to introduce more variation in the melody. At the moment you are pretty much stick to notes on the beat - I'd maybe introduce some quavers here and there. But things like this you will learn as you get better at piano and learn to play more complicated pieces.

That was nice, and I got the winter morning vibe off it immediately.

Good, bit repetitive at places but it's good for your first try, and you will get better with time.

I don't like the little staccato bit at the end, a bit uncharacteristic if you ask me.

You captured the characteristics very well.

Well, when i trascribed this for you it sound very nice.

Good job