My music pieces on FL studio

here are some links of my music pieces

that i made on fruity loops studio 7

YouTube - Aggressive: written on FL 7 by Zalabany

YouTube - Elektro Arabian written by Zalabany on FL studio 7

YouTube - Nuit music composed by Zalabany on FL7

i hope you like them

and feel free to comment

Zalabany

I only listened to "Aggressive".... sounded pretty cool - lots of variation. Did you use freeware synths or did you buy some (such as Sytrus)? I think the mix sounded a bit muddy, but maybe it was just youtube.

thank you !!

well yeah i bought the Nexus synth and used other free plugins such as vanguard

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I only listened to "Aggressive".... sounded pretty cool - lots of variation. Did you use freeware synths or did you buy some (such as Sytrus)? I think the mix sounded a bit muddy, but maybe it was just youtube.

Sytrus comes with FL Studio.

The pieces sound pretty cool. Love the morphing pads. A slight problem is the volume of the drums. You should compress it a LOT. See the volume bar at the top left hand corner in FL Studio? Don't let it hit red. Other than that, they're pretty good, nice techno/dance tracks. How long have you been composing?

O man this aggressive song is getting me so pumped, I just wanna kick some dudes in the face or drive real fast in my ute. Though it badly needs some better mixin' like others have said. My first FL songs all went into the red too, though they weren't as good as this one, it just seems weird that for such a neat song you've overlooked something like that.

O snap this elektro arabian is pretty much the same deal as the first only it reminds me of the desert levels in arcade games. The kind where you make funny faces while bobbing your head and kicking the donkey belonging to the bad dudes. O snap there was a transition that was pretty terrible but the individual parts were good, just the transition sucked.

this Nuit song is not as awesome and also I'm not seeing a whole lot of variety as I go by, mix some stuff up like use some notes you don't usually use, perhaps D, D is a good note dude. also that was meant in regards to all your music not just this track, you need to break out of your style a bit more and get a bit loosey goosey, although not necessary it is good to do different things every now and again and experiment with your music.

Also this brass isn't so hot, you might want to look into getting an orchestral plugin like edirol orchestra if you're going to be doing alot of brass in the future. There is also a bit too much reverb on your plucking synth there.

Overall you have much talent, just watch your levels, learn to compress stuff, and watch out that you don't fall into a huge gaping hole of similarity.

O btw the second half of that nuit song kicks hell of donkey though the very last little plucked arpeggio could have gone on for a bit longer, perhaps an entire quiet little section of only plucking

I listened to aggressive and from what I heard it lacked melody/harmony at times. but it still sounded cool

Not bad,

I listened to all three, and I think my favorite was the first (aggressive, though I only listened to the newer mix of it). I agree about the brass in the third one, it does sound kind of hokey. I know that you are kind of playing the hand you're dealt, so I expect you don't have better, but there are probably some ways to make them sound either more legit or more interesting. Other than that, the songs had pretty good shape and layering. Keep up the good work!

Thank you so much !

I know i'm not good with mastering ..

I am now learning to use compression ...

Here is some trance pieces I made after using a compressor

YouTube - Metal Gear Solid 2 Remix

YouTube - Trance Aftermath by Zalabany on FL7

Hello I listened to Agressive, I thought it was pretty cool.

I actually like Arabian a lot better, it was pretty chill,

I did not really like Nuit music however,

just listened to Trance Passion, so far that is my favorite

Metal gar was pretty cool, but not amazing or anything

and finally I thought trance after math was alright too,

but overall good work I hope you stick around :thumbsup:

Well, here is another music I made using fruity loops studio 7

I made it one day before starting the damn new college term that's why it's a little sad...

I think that it's not my best but I just want to see what you think..

Not really liking the piano, could have used a little variation