Piano Piece in C# minor

please i need your comments to improve my techniques :)

hope you will enjoy it :)

Piano Piece in C# minor.mid

Nice!

You have good ideas, but they seem to spring out of nowhere. I think (unless this was the intended effect) that there should be smoother transitions and climaxes and anticlimax's to and from these themes.

this is a fun piece, its a unique style but it makes sense to me musically

A fun sounding piece. Its quite short. You have enough material and ideas to extend it a bit with through variations and development.

I think it would be worth revisiting and reworking so that you end up with something more substantial.

I liked it :thumbsup:

dude, your styles awesome.

i dont really know what to say about it, but all i can say is that its quite enjoyable to listen to.

Is there a non-midi version of this?

PDF Score!!!

A lovely little piece; The first thing I would do though is change your harmonies in the beginning of the piece. The left hand has solely tradic harmony, through in a 7th or something here or to add a little color.

And yeah, you should work it a bit more...you've got tons of motifs in here that need expanding. :D