hello everyone

hello everyone two works in PROGRESS check them out thanks

daniel

d550.mid

suspenso_baile.mid

please review my pieces tell me what you think thanks a lot

daniel

hello everyone please give your opinion i would really appreciate it thanks a lot congratulation in all your works to everyone they are grat

see you later bye

My personal opinion: medium for the first archive, I don't have enough time to review the second one.

It have sad-sentimental notes and chords, but the "finale" was misplaced. I think that you should keep working on it and make the finale more subtle, so it doesn't make a lot of diference at the end of the piece.

Putting that aside, it was beautiful. Hope you can compose more and never quit. :)

Daniel, just to tell you: don't be in such a hurry for reviews: sometimes they're hard to come: so don't ask again after 15 or 20 minutes: it might take you a week to get a single review. That's how we work.

Have a nice day :D

ok thanks a lot everyone i wanted it reviewed so fast cause i like them a lot and i was very exited but thats just me :) but thanks a lot the pieces are not complete and they need some arrengments

daniel