May 22, 20169 yr It has a nice brooding cinematic mood which I enjoyed. The lead bell sound was nice but could use some variation, meaning another instrument to take the lead once in a while. The melody itself could use some refinement and definition. there is nothing I like more than a melody I can sing because I cannot forget it. So, in short, I think you need more than a mood to make this work. And to get more responses, please post the score. Folks around here really like to have a score to go with the music. I don't care so much. Good Luck to you!
May 22, 20169 yr Opening credits for a movie. Possibly a mystery movie. Or perhaps an horror film where an obsession with clocks plays a major role. Or eventually a time-travel story. You nailed the mood. But I must second Ken's criticisms (as usual, I must add). You can build some solid strenght with a better treatment of your melodic and harmonic material. Without a score it is harder for me to pinpoint any suggestions, but yet it's pretty obvious that you can make a memorable melody with a few tweaks here and there. Thanks for sharing!
May 22, 20169 yr Author Thanks for your comments! Yes Ken, maybe I should have added another instrument also, to the "clock theme". It became a little bit boring. I don't have score, because I don't use score base Digital Audio Workstation. I usually write music with Presonus Studio One, and it does't have score editor.
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