Zimr Music Posted December 18, 2016 Share Posted December 18, 2016 Another track WIP for my album. MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Voyage Alpha Centauri > next Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monarcheon Posted December 21, 2016 Share Posted December 21, 2016 I thought the treble in this one was far too overbearing. At 1:16 your chords and melody start to overlap in weird ways due to the non-harmonic tones. Your efforts to change things shouldn't result in uncomfortability. The minimalistic style was perfect here though, it seemed canonical and flowed well. Look at Electric Counterpoint for an explanation. The general theoretical feel of this one is really good! Just change some levels and it would be a lot more smooth. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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