Soliloquy for Piano No. 10

This is my 10th soliloquy for piano.

Here is the link to my 9th piano soliloquy:

http://www.youngcomposers.com/t33979/soliloquy-for-piano-no-9/

Pretty good use of rhythmic development and motivic structure instead of notes.
However:

• mm. 14-16, chords are very obscure and are hard to sonically differentiate.
• m. 4, the oblique motion to the third interval is a little bit strange and jump sounding.
• mm. 10-11 was the only place where the left hand didn't really seem to match the right.
• Use some cross staff voicing with your low right hand notes (i.e. m. 8)
• Maybe using that 2/4 time sig change would be better for all the instances of that kind of rhythmic cadence, but it works well enough, I suppose.

Cheers!

Thanks Monarcheon for your review, feedback and advice.