Orchestral theme

Hello,

Please your feedback regarding this piece. This was composed on Jul of this year. I am not a pro, but I always do my best. I hope you like it.

Thanks!

This one has good independent lines, which is what I expect ir orchestral works.

Polyphonic execution was pretty well done, though some issues with cross relations are in this piece as well. Not a huge deal, but can make a chord progression sound less strong just because of the defiance of expectation. 
Timbral crossed voices become a slight issue here, but like I said, it was mostly well done. Just something for you to take note of in the future. 

thanks for your comments and feedback!. :)

1 hour ago, ilv said:

@Monarcheon, out of curiosity, what do you mean by "cross-relations?" I personally notice some potentially unintended dissonances and less-than-optimal harmonies.

 

First of all, when tagging a member, make sure you get a dropdown menu after you @ sign, otherwise it won't tag the person.
Secondly, a cross relation is just when notes from different modes of the same scale are used together in a measure or chord. Done purposefully, it's a powerful tool, but done on accident, it sounds very awkward.