aMusicComposer Posted September 4, 2017 Share Posted September 4, 2017 MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu String Trio in D minor > next PDF String Trio in D minor-Score_and_Parts Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luis Hernández Posted September 4, 2017 Share Posted September 4, 2017 I ike it. Don't know why but I prefer baroque style, in nowadays composer's pieces. Nice counterpoint parts. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monarcheon Posted September 4, 2017 Share Posted September 4, 2017 m. 6 - leap in cello. m. 9 - awkward i vs. vii sub chord m. 14 - transitory half step is a neat effect, but doesn't resolve in a way that makes use of it, making it just sound like a wrong note. m. 17 - viola doesn't really need to drop out. m. 20 - don't leave a tonic holding with the third of a V chord only. m. 25 - 28 - weird to have so much unison at this slow tempo. m. 29 - 32 - awkward little phrase that doesn't achieve much. m. 38 - leap in cello. m. 40 - same problem as before. m. 43 - leap in all voices. In general, I think the slow tempo hinders this. I get it's supposed to be like a crawling from the deep kind of thing, but there a lot of parts were you lose the intensity of what you've written because of it. It has really good ideas (the mode mixture in your main motif is wonderful) but I think could probably have some more resolution overall. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aMusicComposer Posted September 4, 2017 Author Share Posted September 4, 2017 This was one of the first pieces I composed (when I was eight) so I was only just getting to grips with writing. Does it show? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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