September 17, 20178 yr Hi all, I am sharing my new theme, it is a Hungarian dance. Please your feedback, hope you like it. Rgds, Ricardo
September 17, 20178 yr Your left and right hand notes don't really agree. Your left hand plays a lot of tonic chords, while your right hand moves harmonically, resulting in some weird chords like A/Dm (or D/Gm in the later sections), which is basically a cluster. The second G minor (iv) section is very strange rhythmically, definitely not the most Hungarian rhythm ever. The ending is also kind of unassuming, but it works okay... just not very exciting, with the piano not really being used to its sonic capabilities in range. It's nice overall.
September 17, 20178 yr Author Thanks Monarcheon for your feedback. I revised the piece as there were some involuntary mistakes (notes not in the right place). Maybe some weird chords were fixed. The rest I am not clear as "weird" doesn't say very much to me. i agree that the second part is not the most Hungarian thing in this world. It looks like a kind of gypsy guy from another place was in that party too Rgds, Ricardo Edited September 17, 20178 yr by Donethur
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