November 5, 20178 yr This is my soliloquy for violin No. 30. Here is the link to my Soliloquy for Violin No. 29: https://www.youngcomposers.com/t34240/soliloquy-for-violin-no-29/
November 8, 20178 yr Good job The first beat of bar 20 sounds slightly awkward. Maybe start it from the G so it is smoother. The fourth in bar 31 does not sound great. Maybe make this a C+A double stop. Apart from these minor points, it's a great piece. Well done!
November 8, 20178 yr Author 4 hours ago, aMusicComposer said: Good job The first beat of bar 20 sounds slightly awkward. Maybe start it from the G so it is smoother. The fourth in bar 31 does not sound great. Maybe make this a C+A double stop. Apart from these minor points, it's a great piece. Well done! Thanks for your review, your appreciation of the piece, and your suggestions!
November 9, 20178 yr I'll tell you what, this piece is so catchy! It's still going round my head just now! Well done again!
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