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A piece I wrote in Sibelius a couple years ago just to get an idea out, which I then had a lot of fun seeing where I could take it. Hope you enjoy!

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In your desire to get in a lot of extensions and 7ths to create the lofty effect, you lose the tone of the music sometimes, changing something that was once originally subtly ambivalent to something confusing and muddy.
Cross relations are kind of an issue in all of the sections, for example C naturals in your A chords in the second section.
I do like your chord progressions generally, but if everything is an altered chord with cross relations, it's hard to get a grasp on what we're listening to, making it hard to analyze.
Good work.

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