November 24, 20178 yr Hello im novice composer from Argentina and i share with you one of my works. i accept critisisms, they help me improve and i hope you like it.
November 26, 20178 yr The melody in your first piece sounds out of place to me in some areas. Your other two pieces are strong for a novice, lacking a little variety but as they are intended as soundtracks you can get away with that. Great use of Vocals/choir, over-all there's some good work here! I wish I could pull of some of what you've done when I was starting out. Keep at it, there's clearly a great composer within you! On a side note may I suggest you upload pieces separately in the future to make it easier for other members to provide feedback.
November 27, 20178 yr Author Thank you very much for you criticims and your words. I am still novice but i improve every day. :)
January 1, 20188 yr For a novice, these are not bad at all. They all have a grand plan in mind. Twin Shadows begins in a very interesting way and the percussion was done well I think. They could develop the melodies more though. You definitely have a great sense of what makes a score sound epic but it seems the only thing you lack really various ways to introduce and develop melodies. You developed a great theme in the third one but it needed to be built on and needed some variation. Using the same chords over and over makes a piece boring. Change up your chord progressions and use both major and minor respectively in that sense, switch keys etc. In time though I can tell you're going to be an amazing composer. Also, your music has great sound quality.
January 3, 20188 yr Author On 1/1/2018 at 6:12 PM, ilv said: For your purposes, you've got some great stuff. Great job! Thank you very much! :)
January 3, 20188 yr Author On 1/1/2018 at 8:30 PM, LostSamurai said: For a novice, these are not bad at all. They all have a grand plan in mind. Twin Shadows begins in a very interesting way and the percussion was done well I think. They could develop the melodies more though. You definitely have a great sense of what makes a score sound epic but it seems the only thing you lack really various ways to introduce and develop melodies. You developed a great theme in the third one but it needed to be built on and needed some variation. Using the same chords over and over makes a piece boring. Change up your chord progressions and use both major and minor respectively in that sense, switch keys etc. In time though I can tell you're going to be an amazing composer. Also, your music has great sound quality. Thank you samurai for your words and i will take everything into account. :) it is dificult mixing for me now.. :(
January 4, 20188 yr I love it, you've got a very interesting way to insert unique things like the shadow twin voice (great detail to pan it, really reminded me of a conversation between the shadows). What Percussion library did you use? As a beginner too, I work with the Kontakt Factory Library and some free stuff I found online but I didn't find cheap Percussion library yet ^^
January 5, 20188 yr Author On 4/1/2018 at 2:52 PM, Leander20null1 said: I love it, you've got a very interesting way to insert unique things like the shadow twin voice (great detail to pan it, really reminded me of a conversation between the shadows). What Percussion library did you use? As a beginner too, I work with the Kontakt Factory Library and some free stuff I found online but I didn't find cheap Percussion library yet ^^ Thanks very much for your words! i use Epic Dhol. Epic taiko ensamble and Action strikes. :)
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