Caspian Moon Posted January 14, 2018 Share Posted January 14, 2018 (edited) Hi everyone! I joined the forum today and i want to share two of my recent compositions. I'm not very good guitar player so please forgive my mistakes These are my compositions. I'm very new to this stuff and i would be very happy if you shared your critique with me. Dernière Valse Coeur Fissuré Edited January 14, 2018 by Caspian Moon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rabbival507 Posted January 28, 2018 Share Posted January 28, 2018 @Caspian Moon First of all, it's great that you're actually playing your compositions. I gave up a long time ago XD I think that your compositions sound nice and calm, I didn't hear any critical mistakes. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caspian Moon Posted January 29, 2018 Author Share Posted January 29, 2018 Thank you :) I reworked the waltz. You can listen to it here. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ilv Posted February 4, 2018 Share Posted February 4, 2018 Lovely concert pieces. Lovely contemporary harmonies. Lots of 7th chords. Nothing to say about the waltz. It's very authentic. Your use of a diminished triad in "Coeur Fissure" wasn't optimal. C major first inversion triad would work better. I felt the melody could be more embellished sometimes, though I don't know if it's technically possible. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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