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14 hours ago, Leander20null1 said:

I really like the mood but at about one minute into the song it sounds as if you forgot to change the articulation for the shorter notes.

 

you are right my fellow composer, grab the next melody. It a was mistake? :(

PD good attention, thanks for listening and for the criticism.

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9 minutes ago, Emanuel said:

you are right my fellow composer, grab the next melody. It a was mistake? :(

PD good attention, thanks for listening and for the criticism.

 

I don't get the first part, what do you mean by "grabbing the next melody"? Sry, English is my 2nd language :)

 

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1 minute ago, Leander20null1 said:

I don't get the first part, what do you mean by "grabbing the next melody"? Sry, English is my 2nd language :)

 

 

me too , i speak spanish. mmm you talk about the little piano notes? right? thosen notes come seized of the following melody, Maybe it a was mistake :/

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2 minutes ago, Emanuel said:

me too , i speak spanish. mmm you talk about the little piano notes? right? thosen notes come seized of the following melody, Maybe it a was mistake :/

 

Nah, actually I really like the piano but I was thinking about the ⅛ notes (at least I think they're ⅛) in the brass section.

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2 minutes ago, Leander20null1 said:

Nah, actually I really like the piano but I was thinking about the ⅛ notes (at least I think they're ⅛) in the brass section.

 

aaaaa sorry i did not undeertand. i think that is fine but maybe there s something wrong. i will check it

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I think this is the best one you've made so far. I like the grand gesture, your brass, and piano sections. I can't get over the fact that your chords are repeatedly being used over and over. It didn't sound so bad in the end but the build up was a bit boring.

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1 minute ago, LostSamurai said:

I think this is the best one you've made so far. I like the grand gesture, your brass, and piano sections. I can't get over the fact that your chords are repeatedly being used over and over. It didn't sound so bad in the end but the build up was a bit boring.

 

hello! and thanks! yes my friend and i think also missed a final notes no?

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I wouldn't say you missed any notes because only you know what notes should go where. I think the notes are fine, if you to change up your chords or switch to a different key and back it'll give your music diversity.

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1 minute ago, LostSamurai said:

I wouldn't say you missed any notes because only you know what notes should go where. I think the notes are fine, if you to change up your chords or switch to a different key and back it'll give your music diversity.

 

Thank you very much LostSamurai, thanks for listening.  im going to improve :)

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Excellent background music. Love the buildups and mood changes. Melody could've resolved at 1:13. Otherwise, great job.

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On 4/2/2018 at 3:00 AM, ilv said:

Excellent background music. Love the buildups and mood changes. Melody could've resolved at 1:13. Otherwise, great job.

 

Thanks my friend! :)

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