Thoughts of Piece so far and Name Suggestions?

              This here particular piece is one that has been in development for around 7 months now. Initially the goal was to have it sound solemn, however this expanded to a quick uplift from what it once was. The backstory was slightly odd to say the least, and at the times I was writing, I didn't even realize I was changing the mood of the song. So, now I'm looking for feedback, name suggestions, etc. What can I do to improve this song, what do you all think as of yet, seeing that its not even half complete and what would be an appropriate title for it? I'm bad with titles.

Edited February 25, 20188 yr by Jacob Jones
Hit enter early, adding new files, removed backstory

Sounds like children flying kites together.

It's very cheerful. I think I would have named it... "flight of the kite" or something.

I can't really give you a good feedback without notes,

if you have them please upload them and call me by writing @Rabbival507 or sending me a private message.

Nice flow. Yes, it radiates merriment, a good, content, comfy life. It could also remind one of an old carousel.