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Christian "Cj" Rhen

"Validus" by Cj Rhen

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:13's chord was awkward. Since it was both diatonic and modulatory at the same time.
The rising tone at :55 was a bit strange since it wasn't actually leading to anything. Cool trumpet solo in the section though.
1:55 was a bit awkward too, since the bass note didn't complement the top tones.
Parallel 5ths around 4:00 sounded weird. The E natural in the section before was awkward too since it didn't sound like the major 6th of G minor.
Nice work.

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