July 21, 20187 yr https://musescore.com/user/28048203/scores/5171640 Edited July 21, 20187 yr by Pacman12
July 21, 20187 yr It’s correct. But in general you don’t take risas. Harmony and Melody stay sale. You can explore more for the left hand.
July 23, 20187 yr I agree with Luis, you should try to vary the left hand more. The parallel fifths make it sound blocky and heavy (and technically should be avoided whenever possible if you're trying to write in a conventional western tonal classical style. But a good effort.
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