August 19, 20187 yr Last year i wrote the suite ,,Four short stories for piano“. This is the second movement. (sheet pdf is attached)
August 19, 20187 yr To me, the first part was exponentially better than the second part (m. 11). You have a really cool atmosphere with the strange Mixolydian tonality, and the competing rhythms. The second part is a lot more standard and a bit immersion breaking. At 11 and 14, I would probably suggest taking out the octaves in the left hand, as it might be too easy to play those notes too loud. 17 also sports a large reach.
August 19, 20187 yr Author 2 hours ago, Monarcheon said: To me, the first part was exponentially better than the second part (m. 11). You have a really cool atmosphere with the strange Mixolydian tonality, and the competing rhythms. The second part is a lot more standard and a bit immersion breaking. At 11 and 14, I would probably suggest taking out the octaves in the left hand, as it might be too easy to play those notes too loud. 17 also sports a large reach. Thank you Monarcheon, i appreciate your suggestions.
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