nenopro Posted August 19, 2018 Share Posted August 19, 2018 Last year i wrote the suite ,,Four short stories for piano“. This is the second movement. (sheet pdf is attached) PDF Nenad Prokopiev - Four short stories for piano Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monarcheon Posted August 19, 2018 Share Posted August 19, 2018 To me, the first part was exponentially better than the second part (m. 11). You have a really cool atmosphere with the strange Mixolydian tonality, and the competing rhythms. The second part is a lot more standard and a bit immersion breaking. At 11 and 14, I would probably suggest taking out the octaves in the left hand, as it might be too easy to play those notes too loud. 17 also sports a large reach. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nenopro Posted August 19, 2018 Author Share Posted August 19, 2018 2 hours ago, Monarcheon said: To me, the first part was exponentially better than the second part (m. 11). You have a really cool atmosphere with the strange Mixolydian tonality, and the competing rhythms. The second part is a lot more standard and a bit immersion breaking. At 11 and 14, I would probably suggest taking out the octaves in the left hand, as it might be too easy to play those notes too loud. 17 also sports a large reach. Thank you Monarcheon, i appreciate your suggestions. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luis Hernández Posted August 19, 2018 Share Posted August 19, 2018 The main motif is quite nice. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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