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Yeah, maybe tone back the percussion a little bit. 
The vox effect would be better as a linear slide than an exponential one since it spans a whole step, not just a semitone.
The use of the syncopated figure at the end in the piano was a nice touch in that register. I could have used something outside of i VII VI VII, sometimes, though..

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Hi... Good work.. Yes I agree with Arthur and Monarcheon..  Percussion gets overwhelming, actually distorted. ..  You might consider letting it cut in/out more i.e. with low male voices.  But as your first post here. It is impressive. 

 

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