cloud10000 7 Posted January 30, 2019 (edited) this is my new piece , hope your commentation @Luis Hernández Edited February 3, 2019 by cloud10000 rearranged the score MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Op109 Nr9 > next PDF Op109 Nr9 score Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SergeOfArniVillage 247 Posted January 30, 2019 I really love this. A “plodding” beginning, which becomes the motif for the entire piece, has material within it that morphs into all sorts of beautiful scales and figures. Just very clever, and with all sorts of pleasant surprises and development throughout. Some of my thoughts: literally the only measure I didn’t like was ms. 36. I know you’re looking to make a transition back to the original theme, but it sounded banal. I think keeping more of the consitently interesting harmony there would have been more convincing. Also, sostenuto pedal would work wonderfully for mss. 38 and 40. Thanks for sharing! 😌 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
J. Lee Graham 93 Posted February 7, 2019 Fantastic piece, in the truest sense, and a tour-de-force of keyboard technique. I didn't always understand what you were trying to express harmonically, but it didn't matter. The overall effect of the piece is the most important thing here. Well done! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
