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this is my new piece , hope your commentation @Luis Hernández

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I really love this. A “plodding” beginning, which becomes the motif for the entire piece, has material within it that morphs into all sorts of beautiful scales and figures. Just very clever, and with all sorts of pleasant surprises and development throughout.

 

Some of my thoughts: literally the only measure I didn’t like was ms. 36. I know you’re looking to make a transition back to the original theme, but it sounded banal. I think keeping more of the consitently interesting harmony there would have been more convincing. Also, sostenuto pedal would work wonderfully for mss. 38 and 40.

 

Thanks for sharing! 😌

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Fantastic piece, in the truest sense, and a tour-de-force of keyboard technique.  I didn't always understand what you were trying to express harmonically, but it didn't matter.  The overall effect of the piece is the most important thing here.  Well done!  

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